Okay, I’m really posting this story now.
It was up. Then I ripped it back down. (Sections were missing; no idea what happened there.)
And now it is back up. The full version with my edits. Just click over to the Free Fiction section and you will see the story.
I also uploaded an epub version of the file. It’s hosted through box.com and should just let you download it for free, no account required etc. If it works otherwise, let me know. WordPress doesn’t want to upload epub files.
So, I hope you enjoy the story. Let me know what you think!